Professional singaporean photographer based in shanghai,china. Does photography for china, singapore and asia.

Please help check my grammar

can anyone please check my grammar. i cant write proper synopsis

“It is year 2064. Super rich man, Bai Jia zi, started a TV channel and started his new mission of providing 24/7 of horrendous TV programs to the audience; sound cracking song singers, weird dancers, mind bogging advertisements and a vulgarity infested host.

Surprisingly, this TV channel receives the highest viewer-ship just 1 month after its debut.

Zhiqiang has his wife, are one such couple whom decides to quit their jobs to take turns watching this horrible TV channel 24hours a day for 28 days consecutively.

What could bring someone to watch such a TV channel in this manner?”


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